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>>No. 902

You are welcome :D
My Americanfriend don't say my English is good.
Nobady can't use foreign languages with few months learning.
Stiring up by English has no meaning.
I recommend you read English text like BBC NEWS.

>>No. 894

>I can not understand what you want to say.
Your sentence is always too long.
sentences are

If I were you, I wouldn't write long sentences.
such a long のが強調できていいですね

Most readers will be exhausted whether your opinion is right or not.
will よりmustの方がこの場合いいですね、煽りたいなら強調した方がいいかと
あと、exhausted whether〜には , が必要ですかね

What matters the most is you make yourself
understood.

いちばん大切なのはあなたになってしまいますね
is what you make

Anyway, long sentences is unnecessary.
sentences are
複数形のミスは他の文を気をつけるとやってしまいがちですね、わかります

あと、sentenceといった同じ単語が続くときはit themなどはを用いたり、passagesなど同じ意味の別の単語を用いるといいですね

>>No. 311

Do you think a great war will start soon？
Most people won't be interested in Nintendo if it will.
are these sentences correct？ or incorrect？
please tell me your opinion.
in my view, the world is getting worse.

こんなんでどうでしょうか
自分も勉強中なんで間違ってるところもありそうですが

勉強のために英語を使ってみるのはいいトレーニングだけど、ここだと間違いを指摘してもらえないから、あんまり効果ないと思う
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